It’s my birthday,
and I’m alone again. But not entirely, even though I’m without Michael. Part of
him stands in front of me, in this once-living wood. No longer living, like the
love he once claimed to have for me. At least the tree still has the life he
gave it in this sculpture. He laughed when I called it the man of myth. But he never gave it another title. I told him
what I saw in it—in the thick trunk, the abbreviated arms stretching out toward
the sky—the image of Poseidon rising out of the ocean. The sea god, a man not
tied by any cord to woman. Nor is the artist who created him.
It’s my
birthday, and my gift is wisdom. The sea may alter the sand and the earth,
weather and age may rot the wood, but only indifference can kill the heart. And
if love lives on in one, it will not die.
I stand with
feet spread apart in the sand and raise my arms in the air.
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This piece was written for two
challenges: Trifecta and the Flash Fiction Blog Hop.
Trifecta: write
a piece of between 33 and 330 words using the following definition:
Flash Fiction Blog Hop:
Use
the above photo and the words custard cord
birthday alter myth
This may be brief, but it's a strong story. I loved the voice of this piece!
ReplyDeleteI was fascinated by the photo but was stumped (accidental pun) for a description. I love your take on it.
ReplyDeleteThis a opening paragraph is absolutely stunning. Poetic and evocative - drew me in hook, line & sinker. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteLoss and acceptance - you really convey both strongly. Great piece!
ReplyDeleteLovely piece, you convey the emotions beautifully.
ReplyDeleteExcellent, and poetic writing!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done! I particularly like the repetition at the beginning of the second and third paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteA lovely piece of flash fiction. I like how you incorporated both challenges together.
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